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65 thoughts on “Lesson 5: Writing A Great Conclusion (Part 1)

  1. my heart was filled with remorse .

    Posted on 18th September 2017 at 8:34 pm
    1. Good description.

      Posted on 22nd September 2017 at 5:21 pm
      1. when I looked at his scar I was filled with regret. I will never be so aggressive again.

        Posted on 29th March 2018 at 1:39 pm
        1. Great job, Luke! ๐Ÿ™‚

          When I looked at his scar, I was filled with regret. I will never be so aggressive again.

          Posted on 6th April 2018 at 4:31 pm
  2. My heart was still thumping vigorously as I breathed .I kept on opening my eyes to see if there were any ghosts,I will not watch any horror movies anymore and I hope I will forget that scene of the horrifying ghost.

    Posted on 20th September 2017 at 4:19 pm
    1. This is a detailed description of your emotions. ๐Ÿ™‚ It can be a conclusion for the composition topic ‘A Frightening Experience’. Great job!

      Posted on 22nd September 2017 at 5:24 pm
  3. An Unpleasant Surprise:
    The disgusting images of the frog still lay in my mind. I kept my eyes open to see if there were any more frogs hiding in our home. I hoped I would forget the scene of that repulsive frog as the sight of it made me want to vomit.

    Posted on 23rd September 2017 at 12:16 pm
    1. Great job, Jasper! You can end with a concluding sentence mentioning the topic too.
      Eg. This unpleasant surprise has left an indelible mark in my mind.

      Posted on 3rd October 2017 at 10:18 am
  4. Lateness
    Once bitten twice shy,I vowed not to be late again. Getting into bed that night, lots of images from the incident kept flashing in my mind. My heart was still palpitating. This incident will be etched in my mind forever.

    Posted on 29th September 2017 at 9:53 pm
    1. Well written Ethan! Keep it up! ๐Ÿ™‚

      Posted on 3rd October 2017 at 10:16 am
  5. Bubbles of joy made me think how I brought a smile to an old folk in a charity drive.From this activity I learnt that little acts of kindess mean so much to others.

    Posted on 15th October 2017 at 10:51 am
    1. I like the phrase ‘bubbles of joy’, Edrei! ๐Ÿ™‚
      Perhaps you can rephrase the sentence to:

      Bubbles of joy erupted in my heart (or filled my heart) when I thought about how I had brought a smile to an old folk in a charity drive.

      Reason: It is not the bubbles of joy that made you think of what happened. It is the other way round. When you think about what happened, you had bubbles of joy.

      Posted on 20th December 2017 at 10:20 am
  6. –Vandalism–

    I could not believe that I was stupid enough to vandalise the school property. I was genuinely remorseful and shame and regret filled my heart. This horrible experience left a bad taste in my mouth and will forever be etched in my mind like an indelible stain on a pristine white wall.

    Posted on 18th October 2017 at 12:50 pm
  7. I thought about the party that was just over.

    Posted on 28th October 2017 at 4:55 pm
  8. I felt ecstatic and pleasant about the achievements I have made by trying this new sport.

    Posted on 28th October 2017 at 5:10 pm
  9. A exciting day:
    Bubbles of joy filled my heart as the events of the day came rushing through my mind.This day will never be forgotten. As I have never been to such an amazing play.

    Posted on 29th October 2017 at 1:59 pm
  10. Lying on my bed that night, the events of the day came rushing wildly through my mind like wild dogs. I solemnly swore, vowing to myself that I would never lie to play video games and that there would be no repetition of this incident. It would never happen again, I thought.

    Posted on 6th November 2017 at 4:05 pm
  11. TITLE:A SAD PICNIC AT THE BEACH.

    I decided not to be so forgetful in future. Making a mental note to always bring my sandcastle building materials whenever my family and I went to the beach, I was so sad I simply sat down on the picnic mat and watched my family play. I sat in silence in the car on the way home, silently cursing myself inwardly for being so forgetful.

    Posted on 6th November 2017 at 4:34 pm
  12. Great job everyone! Keep sharing your writing so that we can all learn from one another.

    Posted on 6th November 2017 at 4:48 pm
  13. I had a sense of remorse when I looked back at what happened earlier.

    Posted on 11th November 2017 at 8:23 pm
  14. I felt regretful and hoped I could make it up to the person I hurt earlier that day.

    Posted on 11th December 2017 at 9:31 am
  15. I regretted and hoped to undo the bad things I had done.

    From RuiMin

    Posted on 11th December 2017 at 10:29 am
  16. A Quarrel

    My heart sank as I thought about the words that I had said to John.

    Posted on 19th December 2017 at 9:38 am
  17. The scene of the terrifying snake attacking my brother kept replaying through my mind. I had goosebumps all over me. Cold sweat dotted my forehead. “It was a really close shave,” I thought to myself as I cuddled my younger brother, David, in my arms.

    Posted on 5th January 2018 at 8:11 am
    1. This is a well-written conclusion. You have included RED nicely. Great job! ๐Ÿ™‚

      Posted on 12th January 2018 at 10:17 am
  18. Dear students, thank you for sharing your writing! Some students find them helpful, so do keep sharing. ๐Ÿ™‚

    I read every one of your comments and I do edit them if I spot grammatical or spelling errors. This is so that others can benefit from your sharing without me explicitly pointing out your errors.

    Keep up the great work!

    Posted on 12th January 2018 at 10:21 am
    1. The worst day of my life:
      Ashlynn, my best friend, did not want to be my friend anymore because she said that I did not talk to her.

      Posted on 23rd January 2018 at 8:19 pm
      1. My best friend, Ashlynn, did not want to talk to me. I felt like my whole world had come to an end. That horrible thought stuck to my mind like a plaster.๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ซ๐Ÿ˜ฉ๐Ÿ’”โค๏ธ๐Ÿงก๐Ÿ’›๐Ÿ’š๐Ÿ’™๐Ÿ’œ๐Ÿ–คI was devastated. My heart ๐Ÿ’œ was as heavy as lead.

        Posted on 23rd January 2018 at 8:36 pm
      2. You have described your sadness and sorrow vividly. However, this would be written in the problem (climax) part of the story and not at the conclusion.

        Did this really happen to you? ๐Ÿ™ Hope you are alright.

        Posted on 1st February 2018 at 2:20 pm
        1. lol

          Posted on 15th April 2018 at 3:43 pm
          1. very LOL!

            Posted on 13th June 2019 at 2:13 pm
  19. I felt happy in my heart as I had done a good deed.

    Posted on 4th March 2018 at 2:03 pm
  20. Lying on my bed that night, the events of the day came rushing through my mind. A sense of guilt overwhelmed me. I regretted criticising John during our quarrel that day.

    Posted on 7th March 2018 at 6:05 am
  21. Topic: an unforgettable event

    As I lay in bed that night, I remembered the exciting things that happened when we had that birthday party in the school canteen. I was filled with joy. It was truly an unforgettable day!

    Posted on 8th March 2018 at 3:41 pm
  22. My heart sank and tears welled up my eyes. I regretted what I had done and hoped to undo it.

    Posted on 11th March 2018 at 9:49 am
  23. Regret and remorse filled my mind as a few tears escaped from my eyes and trickled down my cheeks, wetting my pillow. Soon, my puffy dry pillow turned damp and flat as tears started to pour down. Wails shook my body as I tried to muffle them in my damp pillow.

    Posted on 16th March 2018 at 4:30 pm
    1. Awesome,’sister’!

      Posted on 15th April 2018 at 3:42 pm
  24. Lying on the bed that night, the events of the day came rushing through my mind as I thought about what happened after the old lady fell and I helped her up. I just could not stop smiling.

    Posted on 18th March 2018 at 2:58 pm
  25. Topic: A horror movie
    Looking at the dark and antique closet, images of the horror scenes of zombies flashed across my mind. I kept telling myself there are no such things as zombies in this world but terror gripped my heart. Feeling regretful, I promised that I will not watch any horror movies again.

    Posted on 8th April 2018 at 4:56 pm
    1. Great job!

      Posted on 12th April 2018 at 4:53 pm
  26. Abel Lee
    -A dangerous act-
    I was feeling down in dumps as my mother had scolded me.I deeply regretted my actions.

    Posted on 13th April 2018 at 3:34 pm
    1. Great job!
      We usually say ‘feeling down in the dumps’. There is a missing ‘the’.

      Posted on 19th April 2018 at 12:33 pm
  27. Surprise Party
    I felt elated .

    Posted on 15th April 2018 at 2:57 pm
    1. ‘elated’ is a nice alternative to the more common word ‘happy’.

      Posted on 19th April 2018 at 12:35 pm
  28. A Surprise Party
    I had never experienced such exhilaration.I had been so happy,my brain felt like exploding.I had thanked my parents profusely for the best birthday party ever.What a great surprise on my birthday!!!!!!!

    Posted on 15th April 2018 at 3:41 pm
    1. That is a lot of joy you have described! ๐Ÿ™‚

      Some rephrasing and correction of grammatical errors to make the paragraph flow smoothly:
      I have never experienced such exhilaration. I felt as if my brain was going to explode. I thanked my parents profusely for the best birthday party ever. What a great surprise on my birthday!

      To make it better, can you or anyone change some of the sentence beginnings? 3 out of the 4 sentences begin with ‘I’. Try it. ๐Ÿ™‚

      Posted on 19th April 2018 at 12:31 pm
  29. I shuddered as I thought about the incidents of the day. Regret overwhelmed me as I grimaced at the sight of the accident scene flashing across my mind. I would never ever be so reckless again.

    Posted on 29th April 2018 at 5:16 pm
  30. I felt a sence of remores and hopelessness and a huge burden to people.

    Posted on 14th May 2018 at 6:54 pm
  31. I felt a sence of remorse and such a huge burden to others.

    Posted on 14th May 2018 at 6:57 pm
  32. Whenever I looked at him, my heart would always be filled with remorse.I promised myself
    to always speak kind words to other people.

    Posted on 15th May 2018 at 5:50 pm
  33. It was a best birthday I ever celebrated. I had so much fun.

    Posted on 1st June 2018 at 5:22 pm
  34. Tears rolled my cheeks as I recalled the horrible incident.

    Posted on 7th September 2018 at 10:07 am
  35. Lying on my bed that night, the events of the day flashed across my mind. I still could not believe that I won the gold medal in the running competition . my heart was still thumping with excitement .

    Posted on 15th September 2018 at 11:16 am
  36. As the day went by, the things that happened started flashing through my mind…I heaved a sigh of relief as I had done a good deed.

    Posted on 17th September 2018 at 7:00 pm
  37. A missing wallet
    My heart was filled with joy after I helped Jane find her missing wallet.

    Posted on 30th November 2018 at 5:30 pm
  38. She was feeling sad as an old lady had an accident.

    Posted on 18th December 2018 at 7:25 pm
  39. He was sad as he injured himself

    Posted on 18th December 2018 at 8:12 pm
  40. I was thrilled that I overcome my shyness and stand on the stage to present my story.

    Posted on 3rd January 2019 at 5:55 pm
  41. I felt remorseful.

    Posted on 9th January 2019 at 8:12 pm
  42. I deeply regretted my actions and wished that I could undo the harm that I had caused.

    Posted on 20th January 2019 at 6:38 pm
  43. I clutched my head in despair when I recalled how Sally, my best friend, stomped off after
    our quarrel.

    Posted on 10th February 2019 at 1:39 pm
  44. I thought about it and I regretted what I had done but it was too late.

    Posted on 30th March 2019 at 12:20 pm
  45. My heart was filled with remorse as I thought through the scary events of the day. I would never let my sister ride my bicycle ever again.

    Posted on 30th March 2019 at 12:28 pm
  46. My heart felt warm as I recalled the good deed that I had done that day. It was a feeling that I could never forget.

    Posted on 13th April 2019 at 10:45 am
  47. I thought of what happened in the morning.

    Posted on 16th May 2019 at 7:37 pm